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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Wed Sep 10 2008, 17:37

antagal naman ng kasunod nung wento ni ryuujin.... hihi... ^^


(nagmadali daw bA?!)



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hi ate pas. nay. tay. ate shella, ryuujin, haicheru, kuti.... sino pa?

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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Thu Sep 11 2008, 14:00

@ Haicheru

Popcorn daw oh.. lewl.. hahahaha

@shella

ganun? romantic flics.. lol!

@Reira

tagal ba ng kasunod? hahaha.. medyo naging busy lng ng konti.. xD.

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-My right hand over her left, hands intertwine as we walked through a path of infinite silence.. The trees line the path, as if coats of armor in a long castle corridor.. She looked at me, her eyes still tearful from what has transpired earlier.. I know, in those eyes, she still bore guilt and uncertainty of whether or not I have been truthful to what I said earlier..

In calm silence, I admitted to myself, I didn't want to forgive her.. My rational mind screamed at me the words "unfair" and "unforgivable".. Truth be told, the first time I saw her, I thought to myself, "she's not worth my time anymore"..

But as soon as I thought of those that time, a crippling feeling gripped my heart.. I knew, I knew that those words were superfluous.. In my heart, I could not bear to not forgive her.. Nothing in this world is irredeemable.. Not even when the one I love destroyed my heart.. And so, I know from that moment on, I still love her.. It is with my love for her that gave me the reason, a good reason, to forgive her..

"You look so unusually calm.. Is there something wrong?" she asked me, breaking the silence, pulling me back to reality..

"No, my dear.. I was just caught in my thoughts, as always.." I replied with a laugh.. I looked at her and I knew she's worth all the pain in the world..

"Listen, about last night.. I'm really, really sorry.. I couldn't bear lie to you anymore, and so I needed to say what must be said.. In all honesty, I somehow wished you'd never forgive me anymore, that you'd throw me out of your life for good.. I thought to myself that was the best way for you.." she said thoughtfully, her eyes starting to get all teary..

I went near her, taking out my handkerchief, and with a gently stroke, wiped off the budding tears from the corners of her eyes..

"Don't cry anymore, my dear.. It was a good move, that you have been honest to me.. Even though I was hurt, it was fine.. I loved you from the start, ever since I can remember.. And it is with that reason that I forgave you.. If I cared only for myself, and thought of all the bad things you did to me, would it still be called love?" I said calmly, hugging her gently..

She remaind silent.. I know for a fact, she was thinking it through, absorbing every word I said.. What I've said were all heartfelt, and I said them with sincerity.. In the end, I never have cared for myself.. It was her welfare I cared for the most.. My love for her kept me aloft, standing amidst great adversity.. Most wonder why I love her this much.. More asks where did it all started, why am I willing to get hurt for someone who most views as a bad girl, at worst labeled as the worst term to degrade a female.. Why? they ask.. Simple, its because I love her.. and as for my history with her, well.. It leaves to be told another day..

The wind lost all its chill as the sun reared its head once again.. I can finally feel the warmth of the day after a cold, extended darkness..


-Memoirs of the Boy, Regards to the Broken and the Fallen-

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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Thu Sep 11 2008, 15:32

banana banana!! *sniff*

that was one hell of a story!!
err .. story nga ba? hehehe ..

Lucky Gal .. ^^

ending nb ean or not?

kuha pa aqku popcorn!! lol!
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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Thu Sep 11 2008, 20:05

@ Haicheru

lol! lol! .. Inde naman complete story yan eh.. hahaha.. Excerpts lng yang mga yan from a short memoir I made 30 pages long. But yes, it is the ending or almost ending part.. hahaha

As for whether or not story lng yan.. Its up to you to find out.. hahah.. coz I'm not telling anything anymore than what has been written in these pages.. lol! lol!
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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Thu Sep 11 2008, 20:55



once again, i would like to say..

SUGEE!~ XD

the wonders of loving nga nmn.. hahahayz!~ - -.

yes jinn- chan, gnun n nga puh.

(hopeless romantic.)

hi lyra.. ^^, and hai! =D

hi din puh s lhat ng bumibisita d2 s page n toh..

kaway kaway!~

isa lng ang masasabi kuh dyan..

may season 2 b yan? wahehe! XD


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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Fri Sep 12 2008, 20:15

@RYUUJINN

that was so .. mixed! haha! feeling qku IRl ngyari yan peo
dhl mxadong mrming palabok(alam mu un palabok?)
ngiging sort of mala-romactic flck xa .. haha!!

mkpgshare nga ren aqku .. peo mamaya na ..
im a peon .. and i have to work.XD
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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Fri Sep 12 2008, 21:12



hai..

palabok? O_o

tsalap nyan ahh.. bwahehe! =D

akuh, feeling kuh lng ah..

based from jinn- chan's IRL experience yan..

am i right, jinn- chan? heehee! ^-^

well, tma nga, may sahog ng unti ung story..

(perhaps due to the elaboration of some events..)

pero it can happen in real life, dba? DBA? ^^,

wahihi..


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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Fri Sep 12 2008, 22:12



ryujin:


part 2!
part 2!

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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Fri Sep 12 2008, 22:32

waw.. na hot seat ako dito ah.. hahaha.. lol! lol!

Oh well.. in totality, ung figures and places dyan, pti ung "melodramatic" scenes, totoo.. I just wrote it in such a way na ma-imagine nung reader ung scenery.. ung conversations naman, most of it were real.. although the original conversations were mostly in filipino.. I just translated it into english, and made it in such a way that the reader can feel the scenes.. hahaha

Pero seriously.. ang bilis nyo pumick up ah.. hahaha..

As for the continuation? hahaha.. alang part two yan.. kxe nga memoir yan eh.. pero inde pa naman ending yang part na yan.. meron pa kasunod yan.. nasa ending chapter na kxe yan.. hahah.. kya medyo tlgahng climactic ung scenes.. hahaha.. lol! lol!

Then again, its up to the reader whether or not those things can happen in real life.. haha. after all, a writer writes what he/she experienced.. In the real world, a lot of things we deemed inconceivable actually happens, although not in a day-to-day basis.. xD..
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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Fri Sep 12 2008, 22:41

^
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hay buhay .. parang life .. haha!
aqku ren .. il write my "chronicles" t0o ..


hai love .. such an oxymooron ..
or nkakamoron nlng .. xD


xaxa .. nytie .. im of to dreamland.Ü
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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Fri Sep 12 2008, 22:53

^
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complicated lng cguro tlga ang love..
kaya people are findin ways to cope up with it.
aun, eventually nkkamoron nga.
hahaha. .

hayz.. gutom lng cguro me.
hehe.. kain na q.
geh ciao.
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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Sat Sep 13 2008, 16:20

papost nga... teka...

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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Sat Sep 13 2008, 16:38

NOTE KO: PATNUBAY NG MATANDA AY KELANGAN SA POST NA TO.

BASAHIN NYU KUNG BORED KAYO OR SOMETHING... MAHABA TO EH.

PERO DI SAKIN TO GALING .. ^^ NAKUHA KO LANG SA BLOG NA LAGI KONG BINABASA. TUNGKOL TO SA ISANG TAO NA SAWANG- SAWA NA MAGING "SECOND OPTION."

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Ilabas Niyo si Dominic Ochoa!!!




"im the character actor in Hollywood movies,
the girl who has to be annoying
so the guy can go to the other girl."
-- parker posey

"i dont get the guy,
i just make him better for someone else."
-anonimus


itu e isang pagpupugay kay dominic ochoa. at sa iba pang tulad niya.

lilinawin ko lang ha, mga bektas. hindi kami close
ni domeng. at lalung wit akiz nagmama-close sa kanya.
HALLER!?! wit ko siya kilala. wa ko rin knows

kung kilala niya si atashi (nagfi-feeling ang
vehykla!?!?!)
AH BASTA! bet ko lang magpugay kay dominic ochoa.


OO!
si domeng na walang malay. si domeng na api. lagi na lang si domeng! si
domeng! si domeng! (sabay laglag sa hagdanan ... waaaaaaaaah!! PANALO! cinematic ampotah!!!)

si domeng. lagi na lang siyang third party. laging nakikisali kina rico at
clau-clau, rico at marvin, marvin at jolina, kina dorina at lavinia.
talagang never bida-bidahan. lagi siyang mali. laging may sablay.laging wala sa hulog. laging naiiwan.

parang si bea bianca na halos ma-lukaret sa kaka-waiting for forever kay angelo.

parang si camille na super eksena kina poknat tsaka bokbok.

kung bet mo ng farang, kilala mo si james marsden?
naku, tumatabo sa takilya ang lulur na itu. pero laing wa sa kanya ang eksena.

sumikat siya sa
x-men. siya nga yung supla-supladitong cyclops,
davah?! lider-lideran.
pero ligwak naman. yung jean grey mas bet yung
wolverine-evermae (ako
man din e). at kung mamamalasin ka nga naman, aba, nashuktay pa yung lulurki, wa pa sa kalahati nung part 3.

sa superman returns jowa-jowaan siya ni lois lane.
ligwak din siya don.
kasi nga nag-return na si superman na ni minsan
hindi man lang
na-baktong.

sa the notebook, ligwak din beauty ng boylet. at
wichelles man lang siya
na-gibsungan ng notebook.

kahit yung mga taga-thats entertainment lang
yung cover-tsina gaya nina isabelle granada, chucky dreyfus at rudolph yaptingchay na wit ko sure kung nag thats nga ba.

sa disturbing behavior na-getlak naman niya si katie holmes. in fuhrview.
hapi ending itu kahit horror-horroran. pero loss yung jolikula. as in yung level na wa kinita.

at sa linya ng mga eksenadora, sa kadulu-duluhan ng pila, nagre-retouch ng muk-up si wanda.

may i ask si atashi kay gabo minsan kung anong problema samin. lahat kasi ng friendship namin may jowa. kami wai.

sabi ni gabo, "wala namang mali satin e. gwapo
ako. may itsura ka naman ..." bet ko talaga mag-basag ng baso't pinggan,
pero wit ko bet ma-loss yung moment. "...pero siguro kasi mashado tayong
mabait. to a fault. mashado tayong nakakatawa. ang sarap nating kasama. parang barkada. ganon. hanggang sa ganon na lang tayo. ganon na tingin nila satin...

... barkada."


nung isang araw tumawag sakin si alpha. sabi niya asa bahay lang daw siya.
nakaligtaan ata niya na na-imbento na yung caller id at knows ko na wai
siya sa balay-chorbalou niya. nanette imbentor ang haliparot. kainis.
eh andon kasi siya sa balay nung bagong wetpaks sa buhay niya.

rodrigo yung nyongalan nung wetpaks. at balita ko matipuno ang wetpaks na itu. nanghihigup ng nota yung parehong pwerta ahihihihi
quality raw talaga. katrabaho siya ni alpha na mashugal niya nang
nadadaan-daanan. at malakas pa bumenta. performer itu sa trabaho. at san ka pa?performance
level din trumabaho ang botomesa. yun yon e.

tumawag siya habang lumalapang akiz ng kwek-kwek. tapos si alpha parang deadma lang. may evaluation pa itu. sa hada skills nung
bakla, pati sa lunok
factor at giling rate per second. super chikka pa
siya tungkol sa boylet, kesyo inlab-inlaban na sa kanya apter one byongkangan session.


eh ayaw ni alpha ng mga jowa-jowa, pero natutuwa siya kay boy-wetpaks.


sa kauna-unahang pagkakataon, nakalunok ako ng buong kwek-kwek. siyempre,hindi ko pinahalata kay alpha. nadaan naman sa sago't gulaman e.

kakajiritate lang. kasi naisip ko lang, lahat ng lulurki, e wetpaks para kay alpha. at lahat ng lulurki bet ni alpha. pwera kay wanda. bakit ganon?
nakaka-demonyo.

e pag may problema siya, run siya kay wanda.

pag may bagong chikka, run siya kay wanda.

pag wa siya makasama lumafang o mag-watch ng apocalypto, run siya kay wanda.

pag di niya bet yung nakikipag-date sa kanya, papasama siya kay wanda. para may rason um-exit sa eksena.

e kerri-kerri ko lang yon. pumapayag naman din kasi si atashi. kasi
shushonga-shonga nga akiz. wa naman kontrata, pero wang duda't pag-iimbot akong pumipirma.

pero sawa na kong maging friend lang.

nakakasawa na ring maging taga-pakinig lang. yung hingahan ng sama ng loob. feeling ko tuloy inidoro si atashi. na nakukuha sa tissue at flush.
minsan nga, hindi pa fina-flush. kaloka!

nakakasawa ring maging parang ama o kuya o nanay-nanayan lang. o kung
anu-anufaflung kamag-anakan na pinagtutuunan ng respeto at wang bahid
ng pambabastos, kahit bet ko rin mabastos paminsan-minsan.

ABA! nakakasawa ring maging special friend lang ha. o kung anupamang klaseng friend yan. LECHE!

gusto ko naman maging special. (HINDI SPECIAL CHILD HA?!! BAKA PAGSASAPUKIN KO KAYO DIYAN!?!)

ayoko nang maging excuse lang o alibi lang ng iba.

ayoko nang maging "lang" lang.

ayokong maging si dominic ochoa sa mga pelikula niya. en im sure hindi niya rin gusto yon.

paminsan-minsan gusto ko rin namang maging bida. hindi yung bida-bidahan lang. yun talagang may sariling iskrip, sariling
monolog, sariling grand entranda at slow-motion sequence. samahan na rin ng theme song, para kumpleto.


gusto ko rin namang ma-experience yung "you complete me" tsaka "you jump, i jump" o kaya "i wanna grow old with you" o kahit "mahal kita, poknat" pwede na yon.

kaya sinabi ko kay alpha yung nabasa ko sa text. eh
magsalita 'ka ko siya
(bitter-bitteran ba o slight lang?). na kung hindi
naman niya makuhang
mahalin si rodrigo, at least wag naman niyang
saktan. wag niyang paasahin yung botomesa.


kasi alam ko yung feeling na ganon e. yung nag-aantay
ka. yung may halong drama na sige ipapakita ko sayo lahat ng kabaitan sa mundo, lahat ng atensiyon na meron ako, lahat ng pag-iintindi ko sa mga pagkukulang mo, kasi umaasa ako na darating yung panahon na mauuntog ka at mare-realize mo na ako na pala yon. na nakumpleto kita. na tatalon ka pag tinopak rin akong tumalon. maalala mo lahat ng nakakalimutan ko pag nag-ulyanin na ko. na sasabihan mo ko na mahal mo poknat ko.


siguro handa rin akong mag-antay. o pag nagsawa na
ko maghintay, i-uuntog na lang kita ng kusa. baka sakali lang ahihihi


sagot lang sakin ni alpha non, "pakyu ka, wanda. sige na, magdo-do na uli kami." hindi pa ko nagbabye-bye e binabaan niya na lola mo.

alam ko sasabihin niyo: nagma-maasim na naman si bakla. siguro nga. pero
hindi lahat kasi natutulak ng sago't gulaman. hindi lahat napapamanhid
ng red horse o ng empi. o nakikiliti ng mga kwentong parlor.

may mga sugat na masarap kinakalikot kahit masakit, para lang hindi mo
makalimutan na may pakiramdam ka pala at hindi mo
lang hinahayaan mangyari sayo lahat yon. para alam mo lang na
nasasaktan ka rin pala.


na baka hindi ka talaga pang-love team. pang flor
de luna ka pala.


PASOK MANAY SHERYN!!!

CUE THEME SONG: maria-HA-flo-HOR-de-lu-HU-na-HA ...





excerpted: anggandaniwanda.blogspot.com

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^

la lang. nakarelate lang
akeiwa. hehe. ^^ go WANDA go!!!

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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Sat Sep 13 2008, 20:14

WALA LANG 'TO.




…The feeling of serenity when I open my eyes that just came from a deep slumber…



…The early morning breeze that gently brushes my skin…



…Those birds that chirp merrily as if it was saying “rise and shine…!”



…The splash of water that seems like tiny crystals…



… The silence just after the heavy rain…



…The early morning sun…



… Addict mode on Dance Battle Audition PH…



… Burning lines on the telephone making “Chikas”…!



…My ever trusted, over used cellphone…



…My PC which is jam packed with DBA, Jason Mraz, and eminem songs…



…Chocolates, ice cream, candies, and other pleasant treats…







…Those text messages I just love to read…



…Those eyes that I just love to stare…



…Those hands I always want to touch…



… Those cheeks I always want to caress…



… That smile that always warm my soul…



…That body I always yearned to be near to…









… Well… I love a person… and I think it is you…

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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Sun Sep 14 2008, 20:32



nice lyra.. =D

natawa akuh dun s pgging third party ni domeng ah.. XD

teka..

cno nga pla c wanda? O_o

dati kuh p nririnig sau yan ahh..


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-Its been two weeks since darkness caused an extended night over an otherwise warm summer day.. Stricken as I was, I retained my calmness, and my inner peace returned gradually as the days flown by..

It's early morning.. There was no hint of chill in the air.. the wind moved callously, touching the strands of my hair with its gentle, airy fingers.. School started, as always, ignorant of what has transpired over the last two weeks..

I stood calmly at the usual spot in the school entrance, patiently waiting for her to arrive, as I always do.. Half a dozen familiar and un-familiar faces rushed past me, a clear look of rush on their faces.. I checked my cellphone watch.. It was already 8:00am, exactly the time she arrives.. Unexpectedly, my cellphone rang..

"Hello.." I answered monotonously, unsure who would be calling me this early..

"Hi.. Are you already at school?" a familiar female voice spoke out.. a sudden skip in my heart beat told me it was her voice.. I smiled widely.

"Good morning, my dear.. Yes, I am at school, at the same spot.. Did you arrive earlier or are you arriving late?" I asked excitedly, smiling wider..

"Oh.. I should've known you'd be at school.. It already 8 am.. I'm still at home, but I wouldn't be coming to school today.. I have some, er, someplace to go with my folks.. I'll be arriving late in the evening, if not early morning.." she said, her voice sounding apologetic.. my smile lessened.. a feeling of discomfort settling down my insides..

"Ah.. I see.. Well, I have my martial arts training later, so I'll be coming home late too.. Can I call you later too?" I asked, trying to extend the time we are talking.. I'm already missing her..

"No, don't call me.. I mean, there won't be much signal, where me and my folks would be.. YOu know, forest and all.. I'll call you first thing once I got home, how's that?" she said casually..

"That'd be fine, my dear.. YOu take good care of yourself, okay?" I said thoughfully..

"DOn't worry, I'll be fine.. My folks will be there anyway.. Good bye.." She said then she hung up the phone..

For some reason, I felt uneasy.. In that short span of time, I longed for her once again.. I felt my strength drained out of my body as I walked limply towards my class..

Class after class, I felt myself getting more uneasy.. The day went on like it usually does.. As the last class ended, I bumped into my sparring partner in my martial arts sessions..

"Hey dude! YOu look awfully pale.. Did the weather finally caught up on your immune systems? Anyway, we have martial arts training later, so shape up.. I dont want to spar with someone so weak.." John said energetically, grabbing me by the shoulders, and hoisting me up straight.

I felt rejuvenated.. Martial arts was what I needed right there and then.. I felt alive once more..

"Thanks partner.. I'll head towards the training hall now.. See you then.. " I said with a new found enthusiasm..

I sprinted cautiously towards the car that waited for me.. I knew for a fact that martial arts would keep my mind off worrying senselessly.. ANd so I headed straight towards the training hall..

It already started to rain as I parked the car inside the training hall compound.. The torrential rain assaulted the roof of my umbrella as soon as I stepped out of the car.. Chilling winds started to embrace my otherwise warm body.. I ran towards the entrance, desperately trying to avoid the piercing coldness of the rainy environment outside..

Training started almost immediately as soon as I got changed.. Like what happened for the majority of the day, nothing new came out of training.. At least in my own personal opinion.. The thought of her still haunted my mind.. I kept wishing I'd somehow see her again soon..

Training ended with a simple bow towards our mentor.. Exhausted as we were, traces of joy and satisfaction dotted the faces of each person inside the hall.. Everyone except perhaps mine.. I sat silently, trying to tell myself she's doing fine..

"Hey, what's up?" a familiar female voice said..

I looked up, half-hoping it was her.. To my surprise, it was Jazz, one of my friends in school and in this training session..

"Hi Jazz.. I'm just tired.." I replied plainly, wiping sweat off my face..

"You know, If you're just tired, then none of those eyes would look so worried.. Is there something wrong?" Jazz asked curiously, sitting down beside my bag, smiling..

"I missed her.. She didn't come to school today.. Said something about going somplace with her folks.. Its the third time this week.. I'm just worried if she okay.." I answered half-heartedly, trying to tell myself everything's fine..

"She'll be fine.. There's probably nothing to worry about, hearing as it is that she's with her folks.." Jazz reassured, drinking water from her jug..

I told myself she's right.. I might've been worrying for nothing all along.. Maybe I was just missing her..

At that moment, John, my sparring partner, burst through the doors of the training hall, looking drenched from the rain.. He went outside earlier, saying he needed to get something from his car..

The rain outside sounded more calm than it did earlier.. I gave me a sigh of relief.. But that relief was suddenly replaced by curiousity as John ran towards my spot, kneeling down in exhaustion as he grabbed Jazz's jug and started gulping water..

"You know, its really not hard to ask permission before you go drinking into someone else's jug.." I said disapprovingly, raising an eyebrow at John's erroneous behavior..

Jazz nodded casually in agreement, grabing the jug from John's grasp, and putting a lid on it..

"Wait till you hear what I have to say before you go telling me about being rude.." John said, looking at me rather seriously..

"Hmm.. What is it?" I asked, taking his words half-seriously..

"You girlfriend.. I saw your girlfriend outside.. Just now.. Sitting inside that fine dining restaurant in front of the training hall.. And get this, she's with someone I don't know, and its a guy.." John said, looking more serious..

"Impossible, John.. My dear is out of town, with her family and relatives.. Maybe you were just seeing things.." I said calmly, but deep inside, a sudden jolt of uneasiness suddenly rose up.. I tried to suppress it, telling myself it cant be her..

"Well, why don't we look outside and see if I'm really just seeing things.." John said with conviction, pulling me and Jazz out of the training hall..

Outside, the rain still drizzled down the streets, gray clouds covering the sky.. It was already getting dark.. Spots of lights started flickering to life as the three of us went closer towards the restaurant on the other side of the street..

"There! See that? The girl wearing a pink jacket with its hood over her head.. The one talking to that guy with a cigarette on his mouth.. Look at her and tell me she's not your girlfriend.." John said, a look of bitter triumph across her rain-soaked face..

I looked closer, trying to make out the face of the girl John was pointing at..

It was her.. A part of me said.. then, as I looked closer, a part of me whispered, its not her. She cant be here.. She's with her folks.. Maybe it was just someone that looked like her..

I voiced it out to John and Jazz.. JOhn still was convinced that the girl is indeed my girlfriend.. In a desperate move to prove his words, he started to move towards the other side of the street but Jazz stopped him..

"You know, maybe he's right.. Maybe its just somone who looked like his girlfriend.. I mean, she has her hood up, and we cant know for sure who it was, not unless her hood falls down or something.." Jazz said rationally, grabbing JOhn by the collar..

I nodded in agreement.. In my stomach, a feeling of uneasiness started to settle down once again, my mind firing questions like "what if John's right?" but I suppressed it once again with my optimism..

As the three of us started to go back inside, JOhn suddenly put his hands on each side of my head and turned it towards the direction of the girl.. To my surprise, the girl hugged the guy and kissed him.. I felt weak around the knees..

"My girlfriend wouldn't kiss another guy.. She loves me.. Its definitely not her.. " I said firmly, trying to sway my chain of thoughts..

As I finished the last words, the hood of the girl suddenly dropped, revealing a long, flowing black hair.. Frighteningly similar to that of my girlfriend.. My eyes narrowed down..

"See? Even though she has her back turned on us, I know she's your girlfriend, bro.. Open your eyes!" John said dead-seriously, looking me in the eye..

"No, you're wrong! My dear wouldn't hug another guy other than me or his dad, let alone kiss another guy on the lips!" I said firmly, still trying to refute what my mind was shouting at me..

Jazz suddenly pushed JOhn away, and took something from my pocket.. She opened my cellphone, pressed a couple of buttons, and put it oh her ears..

"If you want proof, then let's call her.. If she picks up the phone, then, its her.. If she's really not your girlfriend, then we don't have nothing to worry about, coz she's not going to answer any phone, right?" Jazz said sternly, attentively observing the girl..

In an unprecedented turn of events, the girl reached down her pockets, and answered her phone, much to my horror..

The noise of the street was suddenly drowned in a sudden rush of emotions to my heart and mind.. A sudden influx of data somehow shut down my rationalizations.. I was, for the second time in my life, speechless, with nary a reason to explain an event nor to assure myself..


-Memoirs of the Boy, The Chaos after the Eye of the storm, Excerpts from real accounts-

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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Mon Sep 15 2008, 10:34

*Ryuujin- nyah... nakaka- ano naman yung story mo... ansakit siguro nun nuh?... nahuli pa ni guy si girl ... anu yan? parang flash back nung nauna mung sinulat? o for the 2nd time, ginawa uli ni girl yun?


*Shella- ee... si wanda yung bading na gumagawa ng blog... na ineenjoy ko basahin pag naiistress ako... hehe.

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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Mon Sep 15 2008, 13:09

@ Reira

Masakit? hahah.. you could just imagine kung ano pakiramdam nung guy nung time na un.. oh well..

As for dun sa isa mo pang tanong.. continuation yan.. two weeks passed since nung post before that..
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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Mon Sep 15 2008, 17:42

@RYUUJINN

my gulay .. la aq masabi .. haha!
tsarap pompyangin nung guy sabay sabing "WAKE UP!" ..
as for the girl .. tzk.
Pipili nlng ng place dun p mlpit sa training hall nung guy ..
if it was me dun aq pupunta sa Basilan .. far from the training hall ..
at mt free fireworks display pa .. ilag lng sa mga bala. just kidding!xD


type type type.Ü

Here's Mine:

[color=orange]JODAN JAI NA YO~(Im not joking)

If there was one thin I was known for, it would be jokes.

Yes.Jokes.Humorous, insulting, or just plain corny.You name it.I can find a joke in almost everything.

Well, kinda.Except for one thing.

You.

Perhaps it was because i didnt find anything relatively amazing about you.You were the typical student of the twenty first century, slightly nerdy, crack, twisted, and sort of normal.

I know.Iknow.With the traits i have given, how could i say tat you were nowhere near the unique?

That was me.The traits were all me.

And well, I didit find my self interesting.

Strange ne? Strange how a person who amuses people finds himslef not apealing.

heh. I am, after all, the gal with everything.
[i]THE[/i] princess Paris.

Well, that was until; everything took place.

It was like a storm, so fast. It was unnoticeable at first.Yet it hit me -us, it brought a lot of damage,zero money,nada.

i lost everything.

I was no longer the Gal with everything.I was no longer THE princess Paris.

I could no longer joke about things, even speak or move.

Then you came.

It was a typical friday schoolday when people would be usually hanging out at the malls, and spending all of thier money buying stuff which, i noted, i currently lacked.

Money.It was my life.Or nearly my Life.

[color=yellow]"Hey, You okay?"[/color]

I shot you a glare.Who in thier right mind would ask that? Who would, in any way, be happy after you hear from your mother that our father lost it all?! [i]BAKA KA OMAE?![/i](are you stupid or something?!), i wanted to say, But i just didnt have enough energy.

I just shook my head.

I was expecting you to leave. It seemed to me that my mere appearance could scare the hell out of people, or make them stay away from me.

Yet you didnt. You remained there.You even patted my head.

[color=yellow]"Dont go sulking like that.I still want to hear your jokes."
[/color]
I could just cry.

Everything pretty much went on after that, I began to smile, just a bit, still recovering from shock. I started to hang out with you. I began to find stuff about you as you found stuff about me.

I beagn to realize that i actually had a friend.

And to think that i used to make fun of you a lot then.Heh, it still makes me laugh.

Perhaps i didnt really need to be THE princess. I could just be Paris.Just Paris.No masks, no pretenses.Just me.

Well, everything pretty much went on. We faced our lives, sweetly and bitterly.We faced each day with optimistic grin and silly looking faces.

We lived.

And well, you became happier when she came.

yes, that girl with the short, brown hair you used to laugh at when we were in elementary.

"[color=yellow]We're already together!"[/color] You said with outmost glee.[i]Like i care, I wanted to say[/i].Yet i just smiled. Smile despite the painful stabbing in my chest.Smile despite it being fake.

Smile though it killed me,more than you could ever know.

Perhaps it was then i realize that something else was going on. it wasnt just the friendly kind of protectiveness.

i didnt know what it was.I didnt have the slightest clue.

And up to this moment im still clueless.

[color=yellow]"hey! am i going to wait for you forever or what?[/color]''

I shot you a blank stare and frowned. Oh crap. Ruined the moment.

[color=red]"you're planning to make me play the chaperone role again? C'mon parekoy, im getting bored of that role! get me a date!"[/color]

You chuckled as you turned to face me.[color=yellow]"You're the perfect person for the role, now lets go!"[/color]

We ran towards a certain gil who was waving at us.

yeah.Perhaps i was the perfect person for thet role.

And perhaps, I do already know what the feeling is.

Its love.

i love you.

And thats no joke.[/color]


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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Mon Sep 15 2008, 17:45

edi ibig sabihin...


kunwari, yung nagusap silang dalawa nung guy, sept 3, nangyari yan mga... sept. 20?


inulit uli ni girl yung ginawa nyang panloloko sa guy, kahit nung unang beses... e pinatawad siya nun?

eeek! sana iwanan na ni guy si girl... he's too good for her... (MANGIALAM BA?!)


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pakipaliwag... mahina pick up ko ngayon.. hihi /RG

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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Mon Sep 15 2008, 19:01

@ Haicheru

Pompyangin mo ung guy? ano un? @_@.. lol! lol!

@Reira

May tama ka.. hahah.. lol! lol! .. If it happened september 3, ung post na un above happened two weeks after, so roughly september 20 nga, or september hahaha..
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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Mon Sep 15 2008, 19:12

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pompyang ..
as in FPJ style ng pambubugbog .. haha!
mgpakita lng tlga sken ung guy pompyangin qku xa.
I know he loves the gal peo .. he shud leave a lil bit of something for himself .. tzk tsk!
haha! il tell him to wake up tas pompyangin q tlga xa .. xD
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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Mon Sep 15 2008, 19:20

@ Haicheru

Hah! Good thing malayo ung guy sayo.. lol! lol! .. At kung sasabihan mo ung guy, dpat matagal mo na ginawa, like three years ago? hahaha.. lol! lol!

In any case, wla lng.. hahaha.. I highly doubt tlgah na makikitah mo ung guy.. lol! lol! .. Nasa laguna un eh.. haha
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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Mon Sep 15 2008, 20:25

3 years ago? hantagal na ah... di pa nakakamove on si guy?



RYUUJIN, kapag nakita mo si guy na asa laguna, sabihin mo, bigyan ako ng buko pie. yung Collete's ah?


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PostSubject: Re: TGG WRITERS GROUP OFFICIAL THREAD!   Mon Sep 15 2008, 21:18

@Reira

hahah.. Collete's pa tlgah eh no? Laughing Laughing

Anyway, naka move on na naman ung Lalake na un.. hahaha. otherwise, kawawa naman xa.. Tsaka, isa pa, after 3 years, marami natutunang bagay ung taong un, kung sino man un..
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